Personally, I think from the initial state and up to this one there can't be shininess because she isn't that taut yet. Making her shiny makes her skin look wet. Same for Dashie in pictures from initial up to number 5. I can't think of anything else, it all looks just perfect. I especially like that the moment of becoming translucent is kept right.
Summary: I think you might want to keep the following timeline for your next series: (if it would be Dashie) 1-5 not sniny (10-50% of the way from zero to boom) 6-7 sniny (60%+) 8-9 transparent (80%+) 10 boom
(if it is fluid inflation like AJ) 1-3 not shiny (may be, 1-2 not shiny... 50% is 2,5 ^_^) 4 shiny and glowing with cider 5 boom
Thank you very much for emotionally positive and joyous Art of the Pop!
i know this is a fetish or whatever but really why
Summary: I think you might want to keep the following timeline for your next series:
(if it would be Dashie)
1-5 not sniny (10-50% of the way from zero to boom)
6-7 sniny (60%+)
8-9 transparent (80%+)
10 boom
(if it is fluid inflation like AJ)
1-3 not shiny (may be, 1-2 not shiny... 50% is 2,5 ^_^)
4 shiny and glowing with cider
5 boom
Thank you very much for emotionally positive and joyous Art of the Pop!